what a great story! the pace that is set for this piece is so good, i’m a big dialogue person. i always look for texts with great dialogue, so i loved this.
Thank you so much. That compliment is lovely to hear since dialogue is something I care for a lot and have worked at quite a bit. Always a pleasure to hear my stories were enjoyed. Appreicate you commenting and reading.
what a great story! the pace that is set for this piece is so good, i’m a big dialogue person. i always look for texts with great dialogue, so i loved this.
Thank you so much. That compliment is lovely to hear since dialogue is something I care for a lot and have worked at quite a bit. Always a pleasure to hear my stories were enjoyed. Appreicate you commenting and reading.
This one punched me right in the chest, hard. Great story, great writing.
Thank you, that’s very kind. I’m delighted to hear that it hit (ha!) for you
Great work, especially on this topic. Paced well, full of nice phrasings. Mmm!
"Ray thinks it probably speaks of some unknown depth to the man. Something benthic." Personal highlight.
Thank you so much.
This is a good piece, bro. Well done.
Thank you, I appreciate you reading.